Hello, and our apologies for the delay.

Before we consider your application for approval, there's a minor revision needed, as well as some clarification in regards to this character's scrying ability.

Your third person sample is short of the minimum word count. As for the scrying ability, what exactly does it allow him to see, what is its limits, etc., as given the nature of the game's setting, it might have to be limited or done away with completely.

Thanks for your patience and if you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask.