Hello, and thank you for your interest in The Wake! Before we consider your application for approval, we'll need a minor revision.

That Test Drive Meme link you provided for a network sample is only in third person. Which makes it confusing for us and makes it more difficult to get his voice down. Could you provide a new sample? It doesn't have to be him going "Where am I?", but some idea of what a post on the network from him would look like.

Also, in terms of his powers, should he get in, he won't have them right away. Any empowering would be lending power, but would take from his own. And he can control only his own beasties once he learns how to make living things.

Please let us know if you have any questions, and we look forward to your revisions.