Unfortunately we will have to reject this again. It is clearly been rushed rather than having any time to polish and improve it since the previous two attempts.
The personality section is missing the additional information we originally asked for. The HTML in your app is also wonky.
Your third person sample is in a network/action spam style, so it doesn't count. Third person samples need to be in prose. It's also way below the minimum word count (300 words).
Because this is a third attempt, we cannot allow you to try applying for this character again until April 3rd. We strongly suggest you ask others to help you write the application and proof-read before you submit it.
Please let us know if you have any questions. Thank you for your understanding.
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The personality section is missing the additional information we originally asked for. The HTML in your app is also wonky.
Your third person sample is in a network/action spam style, so it doesn't count. Third person samples need to be in prose. It's also way below the minimum word count (300 words).
Because this is a third attempt, we cannot allow you to try applying for this character again until April 3rd. We strongly suggest you ask others to help you write the application and proof-read before you submit it.
Please let us know if you have any questions. Thank you for your understanding.