Hello, and thank you for your interest in The Wake! Before we consider your application for approval, we'll need a couple revisions.

We would like to see the history section expanded more. What about the events he was personally involved in, and how did it affect him? What specifically his Ordeal was against the Lone Power, how it changed/affected him personally?

The third person sample is in action spam. It needs to be in prose. Can you provide a different sample?

Please let us know if you have any questions, and we look forward to your revisions.