Hello, and thank you for your interest in The Wake! Before we consider your application for approval, we'll need a couple revisions.

Your network sample is in prose when it needs to be in action spam (the style that makes the network format).

For example: [character action]

character talking


Can you provide a different sample?

Your personality feels more like a part of the history section due it stating more facts, or repeating what's in the history section, rather than actually explaining his personality. Please expand it more.

Please let us know if you have any questions, and we look forward to your revisions.