Hello, and thank you for your interest in The Wake! Before we consider your application for approval, we'll need some revisions.

Your network sample feels very stiff and disjointed. As if it's a spattering of different introductions that got combined together with no proper ending to it. We ask that you edit this to make the sample flow better.

The third person sample is too short as it's only 288 words. If you're having trouble with counting out your samples to reach the minimum requirement, we recommend this word counter.

Please let us know if you have any questions, and we look forward to your revisions.