Hello, and thank you for your interest in The Wake! Before we consider your application for approval, we'll need a minor revision.

Your network sample is a bit on the short side and we would like a little more meat to it. Like why is he excited, what are his thoughts? Is it cool because he's discovered it on his own? The possibilities it has for him? Is there something amazing inside? Is it pretty?, etc.

Please let us know if you have any questions, and we look forward to your revisions.